T2+Narrate

__Sunday 3rd July 2011__ Beep beep beep. I picked up my phone and there was a urgent call that I needed to head up to the board room. Racing to the board room I ran into the room and took a seat. Silence over took as we were listenng to the news. “Breaking News, Missing person. David and his daughter Stella went out in there yacht and have not returned. Family and friends are devastated but are still searching” “We are heading out on the boat 9am sharp” The officer quickly stated.
 * T2 Short Story** T2 Narrive

“You ready captain” I yelled. I was down under the sky deck starting the engine. I then met up with the crew and we mapped up where about’s we were going and we then linked it to the evidence. They were last seen by a boat between Greenland and Canada so we were heading out towards Greenland now, if we had no luck there we would go to the Canada and stay the night there because it would be dark by then and start up again at 5:00am. That was the plan. We made our way to Greenland It felt like it took forever.

“Were nearly there, about 10 more minutes. We are heading towards Thunder Bay and hopefully we will get some idea of where they have been last” stated the detective. We arrived at Thunder bay, we didn't know where to start looking. It was such a small bay and there was barley any people around. So decided to start at the top of the bay and make our way down to the bottom. "Captain, captain” I shrieked. “Look quickly” He sprinted down to the sky deck. “Quick grab it!!” It was harder than I thought, with the current, it mustn’t of been a very heavy because it hadn’t sinked yet. We finally scooped up the peculiar looking object that seemed to be part of a motor. And placed down on the deck. It looked wrecked. We took it to the lab and observed it, and how long it had been it had been in the water. It turned out that it had been in the water 16 days that was how long Stella and David had been missing for. Was that just coincidental or did it have something to do with Stella and David? I wondered.

We left the scientists to examine the object. We persisted, we couldn’t find much more evidence. We decided to go see if the scientists had found any more evidence. There was nothing more to find. So we decided to cut the object open and to see what was inside it that made it float.

It was easier than we thought. We just cut it straight through the middle. You better have a look at this. We pulled open the motor and right inside it was a whole big clump of bright yellow sponge. It was covered in sea barnacles and inside it was a note and it said...

Help, we are trapped in Antarctica on an ice burg with no food at all. We hope that someone will get this and come save us. We are cold and Stella has hypothermia. Were have made our way to they top of Antarctica. Stella and David

We left immediately it took around 48 hours to get to Antarctica. Whilst we were traveling we mapped out the top of Antarctica. We eventually got there. It felt like it took forever but we finally got there. It was midnight. We couldn’t hear anything. It was so silent all we could hear was the slow swishing of the water. The flood lights were on and they were beaming. But we couldn’t see anything. We swiftly made our way up to the tip of Antarctica and couldn’t see any sign of life.

We searched and searched for ages but there was no sign of life. “Did you here that” I asked suddenly We all went silent. Listening. We suddenly heard a murmur it was so faint we could barely here it. “Where are you” I yelled cautiously “On ice burg at top, please we need help” We raced off and looked for any ice burgs but there was none to be found, “Help” we heard again. The call was coming from our right it was very faint tho. We headed out to the right and kept going until the call got clearer. “STOP!!!!” i screamed On the iceberg there were two unconscious people. As soon as knew I had seen them I sprinted to the phone and rung a paramedic.

The helicopter was on it’s way and arrived around 13 minutes later we didn’t know what t do because they were both unconscious so there was no way of communicating with them to check that they were alright. We figured out how to reach them but in the end we decided to land the helicopter on the boat and then we would somehow attach the iceberg onto the boat with a chain and then the paramedics would come and send a stretcher down to the iceberg and we would then they would take them into the helicopter and take them to the closest hospital. We made our to the iceberg. And went through with the plan it took a while but we finally finished and Stella and David are now in hospital.

Stella was critical but stable and David was fine with a mild case of hypothermia. And they were both so glad to see there family again. It ended up that there boat had actually got a hole in it and was sinking. The motor was also joint to the boat.

Stella and David were both very well and are now out of hospital and are well and are back with there family and they even ended up buying a new boat.

__Tuesday 28th June 2011__ Beep beep beep beep. I picked up my pager and there was a urgent call for me to head up to the board room. Racing up to the board room I ran into the room and took a seat. It was silent, detective Brian flicked on the news, and we looked at each other puzzled. “Breaking News, A reported missing person. David and his daughter Stella went out in there yacht and have not returned. Family and friends are devastated but are still searching” The news had said it all I could tell that we were going to find them. “We are heading out on the boat 9am sharp” I had done a lot of boat work in my life I suppose that was because I had been in the navy for a few years.

“You ready captain” I yelled. I was down under the sky deck starting the engine. I then met up with the crew and we mapped up where about’s we were going and we then linked it to the evidence. They were last seen by a boat between Greenland and Canada so we were heading out towards Greenland now and if we had no luck there we would go to the Canada and stay the night there because it would be dark by then and start up again at 5:00am. That was our plan we made our way to Greenland It felt like it took forever. We didn’t know where to start looking.

“Were nearly there, about 10 more minutes. We are heading to Thunder Bay and hopefully we will get some idea of where they have been last” stated the detective. We arrived at Thunder bay, we didn't know what to do where to go, it was such a small bay and there was barley any people around. We decided to start at the top of the bay and make our way down to the bottom. "Captain, captain” I shrieked. “Look quickly” He raced down to the sky deck. “Quick grab it!!” It was harder than I thought with the current, it mustn’t of been a very heavy motor because it hadn’t sinked yet. We finally scooped up the aluminum that looked to be part of a motor and carefully placed down on the deck. It looked wrecked it had evan started to grow some sort of grime on it. We then took it to the lab and observed it and how long it had been it had been in the water. It turned out that it had been in the water 16 days. And that was how long Stella and David had been missing for.

We left the scientists to do there job and told them to contact us if needed. We persisted. We couldn’t find much more evidence, so we decided to go see if the scientists had found any more evidence. There was nothing much more that they could find. So we decided to cut it open and to see what was inside it that Made it float.

It was easier than we thought. We just cut it straight through the middle. Captain you better have a look at this. We pulled open the motor and right inside it was a whole big clump of bright yellow sponge. It was covered in sea barnacles and inside it was a note and it said

Help, we are trapped in Antarctica on an ice burg with no food at all! And hope that someone will get this and come save us. We are very cold and Stella has all the symptoms for hypothermia. We have made our way to they top of Antarctica. Stella and David

We left immediately. We raced to Antarctica it took around 48 hours. Whilst we were traveling we mapped out the top of Antarctica. We eventually got there. It felt like it took forever but we finally got there. It was midnight. We couldn’t here anything. It was so silent all we could here was the slow swishing of the sea. The flood lights were on and they were beaming. But we couldn’t see anything. We swiftly made our way up to the tip of Antarctica and couldn’t see any sign of life.

We searched and searched for ages but there was no sign of life. “Did you here that” I asked suddenly We all went silent.Listening. We suddenly heard a murmur it was so quiet we barely could here it, it was that faint. “Where are you” I yelled cautiously “On ice burg at top, please we need help” We raced off and looked for any ice burgs but there was none to be found, “Help” we heard again. The call was coming from our right it was very faint tho. We headed out to the right and kept going until the call got clearer. “STOP!!!!” i screamed There they were lying n the iceberg they were unconscious and even then they were unconscious. As soon as knew I had seen them I sprinted to the phone and rung a paramedic.

The helicopter was on it’s way and arrived around 13 minutes later we didn’t know what t do because they were both unconscious so there was no way of communicating with them to check that they were alright. It was hard work figuring out how to reach them but in the end we decided to land the helicopter on the boat and then we would somehow attach the iceberg onto the boat with a chain and then the parimedics would come and

__Friday 24th June 2011__ Beep beep beep beep. I picked up my pager and there was a urgent call for me to head up to the board room. Racing up to the board room I ran into the room and took a seat. It was silent, detective Brian flicked on the news, and we looked at each other puzzled. “Breaking News, A reported missing person. David and his daughter Stella went out in there yacht and have not returned. Family and friends are devastated but are still searching” The news had said it all I could tell that we were going to find them. “We are heading out on the boat 9am sharp” I had done a lot of boat work in my life I suppose that was because I had been in the navy for a few years.

“You ready captain” I yelled. I was down under the sky deck starting the engine. I then met up with the crew and we mapped up where about’s we were going and we then linked it to the evidence. They were last seen by a boat between Greenland and Canada so we were heading out towards Greenland now and if we had no luck there we would go to the Canada and stay the night there because it would be dark by then and start up again at 5:00am. That was our plan we made our way to Greenland It felt like it took forever. We didn’t know where to start looking.

“Were nearly there, about 10 more minutes. We are heading to Thunder Bay and hopefully we will get some idea of where they have been last” stated the detective. We arrived at Thunder bay, we didn't know what to do where to go, it was such a small bay and there was barley any people around. We decided to start at the top of the bay and make our way down to the bottom. "Captain, captain” I shrieked. “Look quickly” He raced down to the sky deck. “Quick grab it!!” It was harder than I thought with the current, it mustn’t of been a very heavy motor because it hadn’t sinked yet. We finally scooped up the aluminum that looked to be part of a motor and carefully placed down on the deck. It looked wrecked it had evan started to grow some sort of grime on it. We then took it to the lab and observed it and how long it had been it had been in the water. It turned out that it had been in the water 16 days. And that was how long Stella and David had been missing for.

We left the scientists to do there job and told them to contact us if needed. We persisted. We couldn’t find much more evidence, so we decided to go see if the scientists had found any more evidence. There was nothing much more that they could find. So we decided to cut it open and to see what was inside it that Made it float.

It was easier than we thought. We just cut it straight through the middle. Captain you better have a look at this. We pulled open the motor and right inside it was a whole big clump of bright yellow sponge. It was covered in sea barnacles and inside it was a note and it said

Help, we are trapped in Antarctica on an ice burg with no food at all! And hope that someone will get this and come save us. We are very cold and Stella has all the symptoms for hypothermia. We have made our way to they top of Antarctica. Stella and David

We left immediately. We raced to Antarctica it took around 48 hours. Whilst we were traveling we mapped out the top of Antarctica. We eventually got there. It felt like it took forever but we finally got there. It was midnight. We couldn’t here anything. It was so silent all we could here was the slow swishing of the sea. The flood lights were on and they were beaming. But we couldn’t see anything. We cruised up to the tip of Antarctica and couldn’t see any sign of life.

__Thursday 23rd June 2011__ Beep beep beep beep. I picked up my pager and there was and urgent call for me to head up to the board room. Racing up to the board room I ran into the room and took a seat. It was silent, detective Brian flicked on the news, and we looked at each other puzzled. “Breaking News, A reported missing person. David and his daughter Stella went out in there yacht and have not returned. Family and friends are devastated but are still searching” The news had said it all I could tell that we were going to find them. “We are heading out on the boat 9am sharp” I had done a lot of boat work in my life i suppose that was because I was of the section in the navy that dealt with all the sea and boat work.

“You ready captain” I yelled. I was down under the sky deck starting the engine. I then met up with the crew and we mapped up where about’s we were going and we then linked it to the evidance. They were last seen by a boat so we were heading out around Greenland. And then if we had no luck there we would go to the Canada and stay the night there because it would be dark by then and start up again at 5:00pm. That was our plan we made our way to Greenland It felt like it took forever. We didn’t know where to start looking.

“Were nearly there, about 10 more minutes. we are heading to Thunder Bay and hopfully we will get some idea of where they have been last” stated the detective. We arrived at thunder bay, we didn't know what to do where to go, it was such a small bay and there was barley any people around. We decided to start at the top of the bay and make our way down to the bottom. "Captain, captain I screamed. Look quickly” He raced down to the sky deck.  “Quick grab it!!”  It was harder than I thought with the current, it mustn’t of been a very heavy motor because it hadn’t sinked yet. We finally scooped up the aluminum that looked to be part of a motor and carefully placed down on the deck. It looked wrecked it had evan started to grow some sort of grime on it. We then took it to the lab and observed it and how long it had been it had been in the water. It turned out that it had been in the water 16 days. And that was how long Stella and David had been missing for.

We left the scientists to do there job and told them to contact us if needed. We persisted. We couldn’t find much more evidence, so we decided to go see if the scientists had found any more evidence. There was nothing much more that they could find. So we decided to cut it open and to see what was inside it that Made it float.

It was easier than we thought.

__Wednesday 22nd June 2011__

**Comment:** **Ruby, you really love writing missing person stories! I hope this time they don't end up dead :+)**

**Target - Next Steps** **Correct punctuation when using speech e.g. a new paragraph when someone is talking & no speech marks when it is just telling the story.**

**We were heading out on the boat at 9am sharp. I had done a lot of boat work in my life because I was in the section in the navy that dealt with all the sea and boat work.**  **“You ready captain” I yelled.**   **I was down under the sky deck starting the engine.** Beep beep beep beep. I picked up my pager and there was and urgent call for me to head up to the board room. Racing up to the board room I ran into the room and took a seat. It was silent, detective Brian flicked on the news, and we looked at each other puzzled. “Breaking News, A reported missing person. David and his daughter Stella went out in there yacht and have not returned. Family and friends are devastated but are still searching” The news had said it all I could tell that we were going to find them. “We are heading out on the boat 9am sharp” I had done a lot of boat work in my life i suppose that was because I was of the section in the navy that dealt with all the sea and boat work.

“You ready captain” I yelled. I was down under the sky deck starting the engine. I then met up with the crew and we mapped up where about’s we were going and we then linked it to the evidance. They were last seen by a boat so we were heading out around Greenland. And then if we had no luck there we would go to the Canada and stay the night there because it would be dark by then and start up again at 5:00pm. That was our plan we made our way to Greenland It felt like it took forever. We didn’t know where to start looking.

“Were nearly there, about 10 more minutes. we are heading to Thunder Bay and hopfully we will get some idea of where they have been last” stated the detective. We arrived at thunder bay, we didn't know what to do where to go, it was such a small bay and there was barley any people around. We decided to start at the top of the bay and make our way down to the bottom. "Captain, captain I screamed. Look quickly, there was a piece of some sort of motor floating down beside us he

__Tuesday 21st June__ Beep beep beep beep. I picked up my pager and there was and urgent call for me to head up to the board room. Racing up to the board room I ran into the room and took a seat. It was silent, detective Brian flicked on the news, and we looked at each other puzzled. “Breaking News, A reported missing person. David and his daughter Stella went out in there yacht and have not returned. Family and friends are devastated but are still searching” The news had said it all I could tell that we were going to go find them. “You ready captain” I yelled. I was down under the sky deck just about to start the engine. The engine roared and we were off. The captain called for a meeting with all the staff and especially the investigators. “What evidence have we got on Stella and David so far” I asked detective Brian.

__Monday 20th June 2011__ The movie is too big to upload.

__Tuesday 14th June 2011__

//Guilt wears a long grey dress never adding any color because she does not believe she is worthy of standing out. She has constant flash backs of her unknown crimes and is always seen with her best friend depression. Guilt often gives away her possessions as she believes she does not deserve them. Walking through the streets, she always is looking down never daring to make eye contact in case she sees forgiveness. In the corner sits guilt, all alone thinking all she does is think, think of the crime think that she may have to face forgiveness. Thinking alone she whispers to her friend lonely, lonely knows all her secrets about the unknown crime.//
 * //Guilt//**

//**Happiness**// //Happiness is constantly wearing yellow. She never stops smiling and is usually found with her best friend Bliss. Her heart is filled with gold and never says a bad word. Her mind is filled with rainbows and flowers. She is never in a bad mood and hangs out with her friend Joy//

__Friday 10th June__

//Guilt wears a long grey dress never adding any colour because she does not believe she is worthy of standing out. She has constant flash backs of her unknown crimes and is always seen with her best friend depression. Guilt often gives away her possessions as she believes she does not deserve them. Walking through the streets, she always is looking down never daring to make eye contact in case she sees forgiveness. In the corner sits guilt, all alone thinking all she does is think, think of the crime think that she may have to face forgiveness.//
 * //Guilt//**